Avoiding Wordiness
Dr. Seuss wrote his famous children's book, The Cat in the Hat, with only 223 words. Green Eggs and Ham has only 50 words. Remember when you were writing papers in school that had to be 500 or 1000 words? Did you try to pad them with additional words to make the minimum length? Well in the business world, the opposite is true. Business people are too busy to spend extra time trying to decipher the main idea out of a wordy document. Professional writers actually work their writing over and over, cutting excessive words, weeding out repetitions and redundancies, and making their message clear and precise for their readers. You may not be a professional writer, but you can learn something from their writing processes.
Audience Awareness:
When you write your business communications, train yourself to think about who your reader is. The following principles for writing concisely will help you to be more aware of your audience.
A Few Principles for Avoiding Wordiness and Creating Interest:
A Few Redundancies to Avoid:
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free gifts |
live pets |
final conclusion |
two twins |
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mix together |
combine together |
for the purpose of |
visible to the eye |
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basic fundamentals |
true facts |
round circle |
over and above |
| return back | red? in color | square in shape | In my opinion,... |
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at this point in time |
each and every |
refer back |
as to whether |

2003 Nancy Adams